[Koha-cvs] koha/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/default/en/help/re... [rel_2_2]

[Joshua Ferraro]

CVSROOT:	/sources/koha
Module name:	koha
Branch: 	rel_2_2
Changes by:	Joshua Ferraro <kados at savannah.gnu.org>	06/03/04 03:41:04

Modified files:
	koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/default/en/help/reports: inventory.tmpl 

Log message:
	Revising english

CVSWeb URLs:
http://cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/koha/koha/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/default/en/help/reports/inventory.tmpl.diff?only_with_tag=rel_2_2&tr1=1.1.2.1&tr2=1.1.2.2&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: koha/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/default/en/help/reports/inventory.tmpl
diff -u koha/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/default/en/help/reports/inventory.tmpl:1.1.2.1 koha/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/default/en/help/reports/inventory.tmpl:1.1.2.2
--- koha/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/default/en/help/reports/inventory.tmpl:1.1.2.1	Mon Feb 27 15:14:18 2006
+++ koha/koha-tmpl/intranet-tmpl/default/en/help/reports/inventory.tmpl	Sat Mar  4 03:41:04 2006
@@ -1,23 +1,23 @@
 <!-- TMPL_INCLUDE name="help-top.inc" -->
 <h1>Inventory help</h1>
-<p>With this screen, you will be able to do invetory of your library</p>
-<p>You have 2 ways to do this :</p>
+<p>With this utility you can take invetory of your collection</p>
+<p>There are two ways to do this :</p>
 <ul>
-<li>list unseen books and search them in shelves</li>
-<li>Scan all books and tell Koha you've seen them</li>
+<li>list books that haven't been 'seen' and then search for them on the shelves</li>
+<li>Scan all books which will tell Koha they have been 'seen'</li>
 </ul>
-<p>Koha can do both !</p>
-<h2>List unseen books and search them in shelves</h2>
+<p>Koha supports both methods:</p>
+<h2>List unseen books and search for them on the shelves</h2>
 <p> In the 1st bloc, you can select :
 <ul>
 <li>a itemcallnumber range: to limit the list to a small physical shelf</li>
-<li>a date last seen: to see books unseen since a long time only</li>
+<li>a date last seen: to see only books which have been unseen for a long time</li>
 </ul>
-<p>If you validate your search, you'll get a list of book. Reach your shelves, search them, and, if you see them, click on them</p>
+<p>If you validate your search, you'll get a list of items. Go to the shelves, search them, and, if you see them, click on them</p>
 <h2>Scan all books and tell Koha you've seen them</h2>
 <p>This feature is new in Koha 2.2.6 : you can now scan ALL the books in your shelves (with a barcode reader and a laptop) and store them in a text file (from notepad or any text-only editor <b>This does NOT include MS-word or OpenOffice.org</b>)</p>
 <p>Once you have a long barcode list, reach the second bloc on inventory.pl, and upload the file : all items you have scanned will automatically be modified to have datelastseen set to whatever you wan</p>
-<p>Once you've done with your library, you can look at missing books by querying the 1st bloc for books unseen since the beginning of your inventory</p>
+<p>Once you're done with your library, you can look at missing books by querying the 1st bloc for books unseen since the beginning of your inventory</p>
 
 <p>Note that inventory is calculated on a "date last seen" flag. This flag is automatically set every time a book circulate</p>
 <!-- TMPL_INCLUDE name="help-bottom.inc" -->